You have
recently participated in a training course. Write a letter and give feedback to
the organiser.
- Give details
about the course.
- What did you like about the course?
- Give some suggestions for improvement.
- What did you like about the course?
- Give some suggestions for improvement.
Dear
Sir/Madame,
I am
writing to give you my feedback about a Finance course which had been organized
at the Novotel Hotel in Warsaw between the 10th and 12th of December this year.
I was delegated there by my company.
I was
really surprised by the merits of this course. Firstly, there was no
possibility to be bored because of the fast pace. In addition, most of
the students there were content by the qualified tutors having PhD titles. They showed that they knew very
well what finance is about. Another important factor was that all
participants were given the books and printed presentations at the end of the
course in order to have a chance of studying the topics more in their spare
time.
Nevertheless,
even the course was good, it might be
better. I think that more time should be given to the debt topic. Most
participants were interested in the mechanism of mortgages and so called
"good debt".
In
addition, the course should had been conducted in a room with the air
conditioning.
I would
like to thank you for organizing this course. I definitely think that, besides the
small demerits, it was a great course and it was worth to take part in it.
I hope my
feedback will be useful.
Yours
faithfully,
Michael
(218 words,
I know, it's too long)
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