ARGUMENT essay - Gap year (essay not checked by professional teacher)
Some people think that students who
finished high school need to have a year of break or a holiday before
continuing their study in a university. Do you agree or disagree?
I agree
(plan/ideas):
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refresh mind
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"charge battery"
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earn money for student tuition (czesne)
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see the world to know what they are interested in/what to study later
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personal improvements / more skills/
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learn language
Many people wonder what they should
do after high school. Some people think that it is best for them to have so
called a gap year or a long holiday before going to a university. Although
there are some disadvantages of such break, in this essay I will argue for
longer holiday or a gap year.
[CHARGING BATTERY]
Firstly, after many years of studying at high school
students should be encouraged to refresh their minds and body. Going somewhere
abroad and resting is even called as "charging internal batteries".
People who are tired are not as efficient at school as their rested peers. The
result of that can be seen for example when looking at lower grades given
to tired students.
[MONEY]
Secondly, a gap year can be especially useful
for students who have to earn money to cover their university fees which
nowadays are really high. If someone earns money for a year being given only
the minimum wage, then probably these money will be enough for him for two years
of studying. Often this is a much better way of funding university fees than
taking a big student loan which has to be paid back after studies.
To sum up, I am inclined to believe that
although it is not easy to get back to school after long break, there are very
good sites of a gap year or a long holiday and taking it could be a great idea,
especially for ones who need to charge their batteries or earn money to pay
tuition fees.
(255 words)
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